{"id":13373,"date":"2005-12-25T20:58:17","date_gmt":"2005-12-26T01:58:17","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.filmbuffonline.com\/FBOLNewsreel\/wordpress\/?p=13373"},"modified":"2021-04-12T16:30:15","modified_gmt":"2021-04-12T20:30:15","slug":"script-review-et-ii-story-treatment","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.filmbuffonline.com\/FBOLNewsreel\/wordpress\/2005\/12\/25\/script-review-et-ii-story-treatment\/","title":{"rendered":"Script Review: ET II Story Treatment"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft\" src=\"http:\/\/www.filmbuffonline.com\/ReadingRoom\/images\/ET21.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"148\" height=\"175\" \/>Story Treatment by Steven Spielberg and Melissa Mathison<\/p>\n<p>Even before the summer of 1982 was half over, it had become obvious that Steven Spielberg\u2019s <strong>E.T.: The Extra-Terrestrial<\/strong> was well on its way to becoming not only the highest grossing film of the summer, but of all time. It seemed that critics and audiences alike where captivated by Spielberg\u2019s story of a young boy who befriends a stranded alien and helps him escape the government and return home. By the end of its initial theatrical run, the film had pulled a little over $359 million at the box office, out-grossing <strong>Star Wars<\/strong>\u2019 $307 million record set five years previously. And, as is often the case with successful films, everyone\u2019s thoughts soon turned to sequels.<\/p>\n<p>At some point during the heady excitement of <strong>E.T.<\/strong>\u2019s opening weeks, Spielberg and <strong>E.T. <\/strong>screenwriter Melissa Mathison sat down and quickly collaborated on a nine page story, dated July 17, 1982, treatment titled <strong>E.T. II: Nocturnal Fears<\/strong>.<\/p>\n<p>The story opens with the landing of a familiar looking spaceship in a familiar looking forest clearing. A hatch slides open, revealing a familiar silhouette. But the extra-terrestrials inside aren\u2019t the friendly scientists like E.T. was. They are an offshoot of E.T.\u2019s race, an albino mutation who are evil and have been at war with E.T.\u2019s people for decades. The aliens, under the command of one called Korel, are investigating the distress signal sent by E.T. in the first film. The interior of their ship is filled with \u201clarge plants and animal-like beasts in cages of light.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Meanwhile, the school year is just about ending for Elliott and his siblings Michael and Gertie. They children are closer to each other thanks to their adventures, though there is an undercurrent of loneliness, as the three miss their alien friend. Their mother Mary &#8211; who is now dating the key-jingling scientist who led the government\u2019s search for E.T. &#8211; is concerned and hoping that time will help ease her three children\u2019s depression. On the roof of their home is E.T.\u2019s improvised radio, still pointed out to space, listening for a message. (This is an idea from the first movie\u2019s original ending. Some time after E.T. had departed Earth, we are shown Elliott, Michael and their friends sitting around the kitchen table. They are once again playing Dungeons &amp; Dragons, but this time Elliot is clearly in charge of the game. The camera begins to rise away from the group, through the kitchen skylight to the roof where the radio is revealed pointed skyward. Although cut from release the scene did appear on the laserdisc and DVD release as an extra feature.)<\/p>\n<p>Elliott soon gets a feeling that E.T. may have returned and he, along with Michael, Gertie and their friends head out to the forest clearing where E.T. left Earth. There they discover the alien\u2019s ship and are captured. In perhaps a twist on the originals film\u2019s capture and examination of E.T. by government scientists, the children are examined by Korel and the other extra-terrestrials. Korel also tortures Elliot for information about E.T., whose real name we learn is Zrek. It is during this torture that Elliot screams out for E.T.\u2019s help, a plea that echoes through the woods and possibly up into the stars.<\/p>\n<p>Back at Elliott\u2019s home, Mary and Dr. Keys discover that the children are missing. Going up to the roof, they find a message on E.T.\u2019s radio- \u201cET help Elliott soon.\u201d The two rush out to the forest clearing.<\/p>\n<p>E.T. finally arrives, freeing the children from their cages. He reprograms Korel\u2019s ship to head for \u201ca remote corner of the galaxy.\u201d Elliott and E.T. have a tearful reunion before E.T. reboards his own mothership and again heads back into the stars.<\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignright\" src=\"http:\/\/www.filmbuffonline.com\/ReadingRoom\/images\/ET22.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"237\" height=\"220\" \/>While the outine by Spielberg and Mathison is obviously not much more than the skeleton of the proposed story, there are a few flaws inherent in the material. The biggest problem is that there isn\u2019t much story material for a two hour film. Also, with the film\u2019s title character, E.T., not appearing until the film\u2019s climactic scenes, the movie runs the high risk of angering audiences who would be expecting him to be the focal point of the story.<\/p>\n<p>The idea for the evil offshoot of E.T.\u2019s race can be traced back to another unrealized Spielberg project <strong>Night Skies<\/strong>. Conceived as a follow-up to <strong>Close Encounters of the Third Kind<\/strong> (1977), <strong>Night Skies<\/strong> was to be the story of a family whose home is terrorized by aliens. Spielberg pitched the story to executives at Universal Studios as \u201c<strong>Straw Dogs<\/strong> with aliens,\u201d while screenwriter John Sayles, who had been hired to develop the script, has stated that he used the 1939 Henry Fonda western <strong>Drums Along The Mohawk<\/strong> as a model. Pre-production on the film had begun with up and coming special effects whiz Rick Baker designing the attacking aliens, when Spielberg decided to pull the plug on the project to instead concentrate on another story of aliens on Earth which would become <strong>E.T.<\/strong>. Spielberg would recycle the family-under-siege idea, substituting the aliens with the supernatural, for <strong>Poltergeist<\/strong> which he co-wrote and produced.<\/p>\n<p>It wasn\u2019t soon after the writing of the treatment that Spielberg decided to drop the idea of doing a sequel. Perhaps Spielberg realized that it would be a fool\u2019s errand to try and follow-up one of the most critically well-received film of its time. As he was reported to have remarked at the time, a sequel to <strong>E.T.<\/strong> \u201cwould do nothing but rob the original of its virginity.\u201d Frank Sanello\u2019s biography <em>Spielberg: The Man, The Movies, The Mythology<\/em> reports the director saying a bit more pragmatically at the time \u201cI\u2019m not about to join the Wall Street generation.\u201d<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<div class=\"mh-excerpt\">Story Treatment by Steven Spielberg and Melissa Mathison Even before the summer of 1982 was half over, it had become obvious that Steven Spielberg\u2019s E.T.: The Extra-Terrestrial was well on its way to becoming not <a class=\"mh-excerpt-more\" href=\"https:\/\/www.filmbuffonline.com\/FBOLNewsreel\/wordpress\/2005\/12\/25\/script-review-et-ii-story-treatment\/\" title=\"Script Review: ET II Story Treatment\">[click for more]<\/a><\/div>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_monsterinsights_skip_tracking":false,"_monsterinsights_sitenote_active":false,"_monsterinsights_sitenote_note":"","_monsterinsights_sitenote_category":0,"_ef_editorial_meta_date_first-draft-date":"","_ef_editorial_meta_paragraph_assignment":"","_ef_editorial_meta_checkbox_needs-photo":"","_ef_editorial_meta_number_word-count":"","footnotes":""},"categories":[170],"tags":[],"series":[],"class_list":{"0":"post-13373","1":"post","2":"type-post","3":"status-publish","4":"format-standard","6":"category-scriptreview"},"aioseo_notices":[],"nelio_content":{"autoShareEndMode":"never","automationSources":{"useCustomSentences":false,"customSentences":[]},"efiAlt":"","efiUrl":"","followers":[4,2],"highlights":[],"isAutoShareEnabled":false,"networkImageIds":[],"permalinkQueryArgs":[],"series":[],"suggestedReferences":[]},"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.filmbuffonline.com\/FBOLNewsreel\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/13373","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.filmbuffonline.com\/FBOLNewsreel\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.filmbuffonline.com\/FBOLNewsreel\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.filmbuffonline.com\/FBOLNewsreel\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.filmbuffonline.com\/FBOLNewsreel\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=13373"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/www.filmbuffonline.com\/FBOLNewsreel\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/13373\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.filmbuffonline.com\/FBOLNewsreel\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=13373"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.filmbuffonline.com\/FBOLNewsreel\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=13373"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.filmbuffonline.com\/FBOLNewsreel\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=13373"},{"taxonomy":"series","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.filmbuffonline.com\/FBOLNewsreel\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/series?post=13373"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}